My ride, 26/10/2014, 23:19

The scent, the feel, the touch-
No chance to wait that much.
Sincere, deep and strong-
No way to wait that long.
No need to be explained-
It’s all in blood and vein.
Much more than words can tell-
The charm and magic spell.
So pure and divine-
It couldn’t be confined
To scope of time and space,
The beauty, trait and grace.
As though has always been
Acute, astute and keen.
The sense, the look, the feel,
At times it seems unreal,
But glance of smoky eyes
Resembles paradise.
And somewhere deep inside
I know — this is my ride!

Eltchin , Filed under: English , 10 комментариев

10 комментариев »

1. 

   Unreal indeed…A glance into the deepest corners of the soul…Perhaps no one could be so sensitive and precise…Deeply impressed…Really excited…No words can tell…

   Комментарий by vikulja — 27 октября, 2014 @ 2:46 дп

2. 

   Какие слова! Я в восторге!
   Спасибо!!!

   Комментарий by Sab-S-Гид — 27 октября, 2014 @ 9:54 пп

3. 

   These sensual lines filled with real feelings are very impressive.

   Комментарий by Sun — 27 октября, 2014 @ 10:09 пп

4. 

   What a beautiful poem. Just wow….
   Very nicely written.Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job 🙂

   Комментарий by Zaira Gasimova — 28 октября, 2014 @ 8:04 пп

5. 

   What a beautiful poem. Just wow…. Very nicely written.Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job.

   Комментарий by Zaira Gasimova — 28 октября, 2014 @ 8:07 пп

6. 

   В этом стихе чувствуется мелодия и чувственность. Надо положить это на музыку.

   Комментарий by Гюльшен — 31 октября, 2014 @ 12:20 пп

7. 

   And somewhere deep inside
   I know – this is my ride!

   Комментарий by Sab-S-Гид — 8 ноября, 2014 @ 12:10 дп

8. 

   that is extremely good, so that despite i seldom read poets, but it actually made me read more, and that will do to express my opinion about the poet. thanx to our Director of Executive Comittee;)

   Sabahstudent

   Комментарий by Murad Əli — 8 ноября, 2014 @ 1:47 дп

9. 

   Excuses. i meant poem(s), not poet(s) 🙂

   Комментарий by Murad Əli — 8 ноября, 2014 @ 1:52 дп

10. 

    Woow )))amazing 🙂 (y)

    Комментарий by Nazrin — 11 ноября, 2014 @ 9:44 пп

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